tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-42739419757943069002012-02-16T11:41:39.240-08:00Melissa &lt;3http://www.blogger.com/profile/13222758855193841109noreply@blogger.comBlogger21100tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4273941975794306900.post-44036963004430697702008-10-21T12:34:00.000-07:002008-10-21T12:56:25.931-07:00<span style="font-family:verdana;">There's a lot of Gang activities where i used to live at.There is a lot of shooting.A lot of people I know has passed away by being in a gang.I think its bad being in a gang because I think your just asking to be dead.Your like a target your asking for it.There is a lot of drugs in the city I lived in to.There is a lot of little boys that join in a gang when there around 10 and some times even younger.Some people just do it cause they want to fit in and also they do cause there life since there were little was messed up and the guys or girls in a gang make them feel like there own family.I think that's really dumb.I don't think that's an excuse to mess up your life or lose it.</span><div class="blogger-post-footer"><img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/4273941975794306900-4403696300443069770?l=melissasblog530.blogspot.com' alt='' /></div>Melissa &lt;3http://www.blogger.com/profile/13222758855193841109noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4273941975794306900.post-48800177930613290132008-10-16T12:37:00.000-07:002008-10-16T12:55:11.751-07:00Step 1 - Compliments<br /><ul><li>the first rule of peer editing is to STAY POSITIVE</li><li>I really love your topic</li><li>I think you used a lot of good details</li><li>I liked when you used the word ____</li><li>My favorite part was _____ because....</li><li>This was really fun to read because...</li><li>I like the way you ________...</li></ul>Step 2 - Suggestions<br /><ul><li>Be specific[give details]</li></ul>Step 3 - Corrections<br /><ul><li>Spelling mistakes</li><li>Sentance mistakes</li><li>Punctuation mistakes</li></ul><div class="blogger-post-footer"><img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/4273941975794306900-4880017793061329013?l=melissasblog530.blogspot.com' alt='' /></div>Melissa &lt;3http://www.blogger.com/profile/13222758855193841109noreply@blogger.com0